tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16950384.post115102610482079489..comments2023-10-20T06:24:13.191-03:00Comments on Ceebie: Poetry ThursdayCeebiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13480362932552752240noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16950384.post-1152376648279191142006-07-08T13:37:00.000-03:002006-07-08T13:37:00.000-03:00Thanks, all. I was pleased with how this came out,...Thanks, all. I was pleased with how this came out, even though it needs reworking, especially in the beginning. It's one of the first true poems I've tried to write, and I was glad to see the muse hasn't left me altogether.Ceebiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13480362932552752240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16950384.post-1152372101695068112006-07-08T12:21:00.000-03:002006-07-08T12:21:00.000-03:00Ahhh. this is lovely."weed the garden into orderun...Ahhh. this is lovely.<BR/><BR/>"weed the garden into order<BR/><BR/>until my heart stills"<BR/><BR/>A wonderful haiku sensibility.<BR/><BR/>Thanks for visiting my blog!Lisa Cohenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07530826748768737972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16950384.post-1151102229036847222006-06-23T19:37:00.000-03:002006-06-23T19:37:00.000-03:00Those last two lines are my favorite. They capture...Those last two lines are my favorite. They capture the whole spirit of the poem I think.writingblindhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16102434762522512019noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16950384.post-1151067819070115802006-06-23T10:03:00.000-03:002006-06-23T10:03:00.000-03:00I like it.I like it.Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13979896448183348883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16950384.post-1151032157298138352006-06-23T00:09:00.000-03:002006-06-23T00:09:00.000-03:00I wrote about weeding too:)I like this alot especi...I wrote about weeding too:)<BR/><BR/>I like this alot especially "step into a flowerbed<BR/>waist high in grasses and wildflowers<BR/>among lazy lady bugs,<BR/>creamy butterfly eggs<BR/>shimmering on flowerheads"Colorsonmymindhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02424878757140605099noreply@blogger.com